The muse has spoken. I've revised the beginning of chapter one.
I admit it had been rather dull, not much of a grabber. I don't know if this is much better, but I feel it's stronger. Still not an immediate plunge into the story, but a brief paragraph about the hero, enough to reveal something about him and pique interest.
The "plunge" occurs two paragraphs later.
This is just the start of the revision process, of course. There will be a thousand more.
--Cat (hoping to make it to chapter four)
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